Charlie and his dry sense of humor never fails to amaze me, even in fanfics. And, plus I love his 'stache. Which is good, because I am pretty sure that he has one in The Night Bella Told Charlie authored by lovetowritedotcom. She is some kid, 12-13 year old, and I am impressed! I couldn't do that well then...well, I could, but still.
The night Bella told Charlie. Charlie’s point of view (by the way, Edward never tells Bella what Charlie is really thinking because it would hurt her feelings).
It's so funny! Except the end where everything is in italics and parentheses. I hated that part, it ruined the moment. Intentionally trying to be funny in fics bothers me. Charles is on my top ten favorite character list, so of course I enjoyed this. Did you?
Overall Score:
B
Don't forget to check out the other Character Spotlight Thursday featuring Emmett!
